peole living longer today
It is known that people are living longer now. Many reasons are counted for the reasons the people are living longer. Among all, two of these reasons are vital importance. These two reasons will be explored below.
To begin with, we have access to more medical system now days, which prevent the spread of diseases. In the past there was no organized health care system and epidemics were uncontrolled. For instance, the diseases caused by smallpox ,plaque, tuberculosis, and even flu could lead to death. However, nowadays due to the advance in the medical and pharmaceutical field, we can manage many disease. For example the invention of
vaccines that help to prevent the spread out of diseases as well as prevent the up coming occurrence of any illness. People today are able to live longer because there are many medication that help to control diseases like hypertension medication and diabetic medications. All those medicine allow people to live longer now with better and healthy life.
Access to food supplies has markedly improved a lot for all people around the world. today all the countries around the world try to create a better relationship between each others. The political situation between countries has been improved than before. Hence the international trade among nations has brought food supplies to all people around the world, this mean less risk of famines, more specifically when drought occur. For instance, poor countries are able to get food supplies from their neighbor richer than them. For instance, country like Somali are very poor country and they usually confronted by famine and drought, nevertheless rich countries such as united states and Europe are trying to help them and providing them with food. People living longer those days because there are more food available for all.
In conclusion for the reason I mentioned above, I believe that the most important reasons that people are living longer nowadays, is that the are huge improvement in the medical and pharmaceutical field as well. People today are faced by more food supply than before, which provide them a better health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16045845272 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52858795178 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4664280093 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.05 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18058838409 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683839456991 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094489644666 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125004331083 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812728488617 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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