People always learn from their mistakes.
Life is full of challenges and how people deal with those situations is a personal thing for each of them. However, the only similarity between humans is that everyone makes mistakes. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that people always learn from mistakes because it is the only way to progress in life.
First of all, society needs to learn from the past so they cannot do the same mistakes. From an educational point of view, every person needs to attend school to learn the history of the world and understand what kind of actions went right and what went wrong. For example, students should know what kind of politics caused inestability in the world so when those children have the age to vote, they will know if a project can cause issues and what would be the impact of their decisions.
Secondly, it is important that every company explains to their employees what can go wrong and what is the impact of their actions. People need bosses who can create a safe environment. For instance, if a manager of a team punish their colleagues because of a mistake, it will create fear and stress. Employers need a manager who can help them to own their mistakes and learn how to deal with them. Furthermore, the way a boss treats their employers can impact on their creativity as if he punish mistakes, the subordinate, they won't share their new ideas.
Finally, mistakes help people to be more confident and strong. In my opinion, families should allow children to do mistakes and learn from them by limiting their parent's decisions. Being over protective and punish for mistakes does not help the children's development. My own experience is an example of how my parents allow me to do what I thought it was correct. The gave me the tools and values and wen I had the chance to choose my own decision and I knee what is was correct or not. This approach has gave me the possibilty to appreciate what I have, learn from what it went wrong and it gave me confidence for the future.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that people always learn from their mistakes because society wants to progress in life. In consequence, people need to learning from the past, bosses need to take care of their team creating a safe environment to make mistakes at work and families need to leave the children to do what they want so they can learn to be more confidence and become stronger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'punishes'.
Suggestion: punishes
...can impact on their creativity as if he punish mistakes, the subordinate, they wont sh...
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Line 7, column 465, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... choose my own decision and I knee what is was correct or not. This approach has g...
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Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...oose my own decision and I knee what is was correct or not. This approach has gave ...
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Line 7, column 506, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...s was correct or not. This approach has gave me the possibilty to appreciate what I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6338028169 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50002534758 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450704225352 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9365690262 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.894736842 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362558208905 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118708173449 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099575620971 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219887418039 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754961747935 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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