Some people prefer to change jobs or professions during their careers. Others choose to stay in the same job or profession. Discuss the advantages of each choice. Which do you prefer? Use reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Organization & Development
Many people think that staying in the same job or profession is the best approach to do a career in a company. They think that loyalty is the most imporant value for an employee to have. I disagree with this idea because I firmly believe that a person should experience and compare a few jobs in their life in order to be the best. The reasons for my belief are social, educational personal.
First of all, from a personal point of view, people should have a minimum of 3 jobs in their lifes to know if the current job is the best that they can get. It is very hard to compare with others if you have not have at least 2 roles to compare. In contrast, if a person has had only one job his entire life, it won't be able to see the advantages and disadvatanges from each job. For example, it is hard to tell that someone has a good boss if this person has never had another boss before.
From a social perspective, It is very important for a professional to have many contacts. In consequence, the idea of having several jobs allows the employee to have a big social network. For instance, my brother has been working on the advertisement industry for the last 10 years and he had 3 jobs. He knows everyone on the field so everytime that there is an event, he is able to have conversations with a lot of people. One of the advatanges of this is that he has met a lot of people who are now his clients because his ex colleagues have presented him many people. On the other hand, if you know only the people who works in your company, it is hard to have a big social network and meet new people.
Finally, professionals who have had another profession before have abroad understanding of several matters. They are capable to learn faster and in the long term, grow in their career. For example, a friend of mine has a degree on graphic design. However, she opt to self studying web development so now is she is a full stack web developer with design skills. Something that every company wants because she is able to create projects and have abroad vision. In contrast, a web developer who has not experience on design has different and reduced view.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that changing jobs or professions is better than staying in the same job or profession. This is because, people can compare between experiences, professionals can have more contacts on their industry and they can have abroad view on task.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... to compare with others if you have not have at least 2 roles to compare. In contras...
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Line 8, column 261, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'opts'.
Suggestion: opts
... degree on graphic design. However, she opt to self studying web development so now...
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Line 8, column 452, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'visioned'.
Suggestion: visioned
...able to create projects and have abroad vision. In contrast, a web developer who has n...
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Line 8, column 501, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...n contrast, a web developer who has not experience on design has different and reduced vie...
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Line 10, column 258, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'viewed'.
Suggestion: viewed
...their industry and they can have abroad view on task.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4966442953 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63082444205 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474272930649 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9926569474 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3636363636 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3181818182 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31818181818 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161633130394 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531961080951 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683246310384 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918566125542 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675202042069 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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