To be successful at work or at school, we must be creative
In order to progress at work and grow in your career, we need to challenge the status quo thinking out of the box. Many studies have shown that successful professional needs to have logical and creative thoughts. Personally, I believe that it is extremely important to be creative. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, creative people are usually more social as they do not mind sharing their ideas. From a work environment perspective, being social allows the employee to do networking with other colleagues and shows what is capable of. For example, my brother is very creative and he is always talking in the company’s kitchen about his ideas. Thanks to this approach, the marketing team invited him to a meeting as they had an issue with a client. They were going to launch a new product but they were looking for an original idea. My brother has been always very creative so he helps them to find an innovative idea which made my sibling get a promotion giving his advice and honoring the company value of help your colleagues.
Secondly, there are studies showing that to be more creative at work, we need to have a lot of knowledge. This is because, to be creative, we need to have a lot of information on our mind and be able to connect and across different fields. For example, a famous entrepreneur from my country who has developed a lot of new medical devices studied to be an electronic engineer. However, his main hobby was medicine as his all family were doctors so every night he used to have dinner with his family and talk about medical science. As a result, he was able to connect his main career and his hobby to create creative ideas and build medical devices which have changed modern medicine.
Lastly, from an educational point of view, being creative allows you to be different at school and stand out from the crowd. This could potentially call attention and create different opportunities. In my country, there was a student who was always recognized by his class and teachers for his good ideas so he entered to a state competition. After a few rounds, he won a scholarship to study abroad thanks to his creative ideas and his teacher’s recognition to push him to be a better student.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that to be successful at work or at school, we must be creative for the several reasons that I provided above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70794392523 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69816317246 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521028037383 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0316640217 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348402623118 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116527828278 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165647221148 0.0737576698707 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2738972295 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211916905082 0.0645574589148 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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