People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Some people think that individuals only work to get a salary by end of the month. However, the are many other reasons to explain why people work such as make the world a better place, to be part of a big a project or for recognition.
First of all, there a lot of people who are working to make a better world and help societies in need. Many business are changing their operation models to beneficiate people who needs more than others. For example, a shoe company named TOMS has transformed the way people experience shoes. They have created a model where every shoe that is sold, generates a free shoe to poor children in Africa. In consequence, many companies have copy this model in order to help people in need.
Secondly, people want to feel that are part of something big. They want to contribute with their skills to a bigger dream. For instance, many companies are investing on new ways to do something that used to take a lot of time. Moreover, these private institutions are creating or transforming new fields and people want to be part of this disruption.
Finally, another reason to explain why people work is that many individuals wants recognition from building something from scratch. In the last few decades, many universities started to teach entrepreneurship and many projects have born. In addition, many books have been written about those projects and I think that many people want that recognition.
In conclusion, there are more reasons besides working for money. For example, people work in order to create better world, to being part of something bigger and to being recognised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88768115942 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67897237475 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518115942029 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7619131682 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3125 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244831374496 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937090830022 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599410649394 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152852980378 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528152868952 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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