People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Money is essential for everyone to lead a comfortable life. Without money, life is nothing because the world has based on money. There is no respect without money everyone busy competing with each other financially. People need fame and respect through money. In my perspective, people work for so many reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To initiate with, it is irrefutable that money is nothing; we can acquire daily commodities with money and can live a happy life. People work to enhance their ability and gain more knowledge in their desired field. It is vital to get experience furthermore, they can implement it in work and get money from it. For instance, I do remember one of my friend he was curious to learn about new things because he became cherish whenever he saw his skills at the top. He worked voluntary, money was not important to him. Like; he worked in different schools and colleges to deliver knowledge, have had a link with ENGOs, and work for people welfare. Additionally, he just interested in making relationships with higher post people and its beneficial latter on his life. According to my view, inner satisfaction and relaxation are more important than money.
In addition to that, people do multiple tasks to keep engage themselves. They do not need to gain high wage but they get mind relaxation through work. If a person always lives free then certainly he got stress etc. Nowadays jobs have become a difficult task to achieve so work without money for some time also benefit indirectly. For example, I worked in a hospital without any cost. I got enormous knowledge and developed very good communication skills with patients. If I stayed the whole day at home, therefore, I become depressed and low. Though I got to experience and when I applied for a job then it gave me a very good reference in my resume. So, in my notion, there is every struggle to bear fruit.
Having manifested the aforementioned point of views and examples, I can recapitulate that money is an indispensable part of life without money, man can’t acquire his necessities. There is a lot of other reasons like some people work for pleasure and some want to help humankind. Sometimes persons involved themselves for the sake of good health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87403598972 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76475250929 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568123393316 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7862410166 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.84 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.56 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277538429814 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800271957922 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650123242642 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176455436358 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323392810929 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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