People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
There are more than 330 millions of people in the United State alone, with different jobs and motivation to work. But, what is the reason that people work? In my opinion, people work because they need a way to support themselves and their families, they want to feel a sense of accomplishment and lastly, because they want to give back to society.
In the economy that we live, were all products are very expensive, people need money and a way to acquire what they need. That is one of the reasons we look for a job, to be able to support ourselves and our families, and provide stability. Once we have that, we want to have a modest home, drive a good car, and if possible educate our kids in good schools.
There are also other kind of people, these people look to work for different reasons. They work because they are looking to have that sense of accomplishment. They want to feel that they have achieved something in life. Regularly, these kind of people are workaholics. They put themselves a specific goal, and they don’t stop until they don’t attained it.
Lastly, there are people that they have accumulated too much money already, that they don’t need to work anymore. These people go to work every day because they want to give back to society. Usually, they love what they do, they don’t see work as work, they see it as a hobby. These people help others, by teaching, donating money to non profit organizations, give money to companies for research and other philanthropic reasons.
We all have to wake up in the morning to go to work, but our reasons varies. The majority of the people go to work because they need money to support themselves and their families, because they want to feel that sense of accomplishment and/ or to give back to society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '330 million'.
Suggestion: 330 million
There are more than 330 millions of people in the United State alone, with ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sible educate our kids in good schools. There are also other kind of people, the...
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Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...good schools. There are also other kind of people, these people look to wo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... There are also other kind of people, these people look to work fo...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... achieved something in life. Regularly, these kind of people are workaholics. They put the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...search and other philanthropic reasons. We all have to wake up in the morning to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shment and/ or to give back to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, look, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74447949527 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55202902667 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432176656151 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4447534264 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434738074208 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175388105024 0.076458572812 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865969076509 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278362699173 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768143639675 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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