People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Working is an essential activity for people. Earning money to survive is a major reason for working but is not the only or most important one. In my opinion, there are a lot of reasons people work other than money. People might be motivated to challenge themselves, find some meaning in life, or to just keep busy. Others find fulfillment in helping others.
People have an instinctual need to wake up every day and do something because our genome was programmed to do so and our necessity to work supports this. Consider this: even the richest person wishes to keep busy. Whether it is thinking about how to spend their money or earn more they are never truly doing nothing. Try to answer this simple question: Why do you wake up every day? Most would say, to make money to survive, but this is not enough! Analyzing this question and human behavior, we can achieve a real answer: we work to feel useful, to stay busy, and to challenge ourselves to be better. Without this, life does not have any true meaning for humanity. A perfect example of our need to do something can be seen at the end of a month-long vacation. The itch to be productive will begin to drive the average person insane.
Another point against working strictly for money is working for the betterment of society. You can clearly see in jobs like being a doctor, a nurse, a psychologist, a lawyer, etc that the desire to help others may be the biggest factor in humanity's drive to work. Looking even deeper, one could argue that all jobs, however indirectly, work together for the sake of all of humanity. I personally have been working with the development of new drugs that can help people with neuropathic pain. At the moment, my research is only in the lab with cell lines and rats, but every bit of progress I have made gets us a bit closer to a final product that could change people's lives.
In conclusion, I believe that people work to feel alive because it is in our very nature to do so. Even if we complain about a dreary day at work, we (hopefully) still love what we do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49333333333 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41182273165 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7312803232 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2771919538 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842260877534 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672407238753 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177971740789 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569059478993 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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