People are never satisfied with what they have. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's hectic world, there are new things which coming up almost every day in different forms and shapes. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that they should stay with old objects and there is no need to change. Other, on the other hand, take a radically different view and allege that in order to be up to date and lively people need to experience something new and never satisfied with our date objects. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent that my personal perspective is concerned, human beings by nature always want to explore life and they need to experience almost new things. If they do not reverse such a trend, they stick with old things and will not be able to reach their goals. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason lending credence to the stance taken above is that with the development of science and technology as well as the globalization, more and more new brand are produced along with a variety of new finding, new lifestyle and new type of services. Scientifically speaking, if we ignore all the new things, the only result may be that we will obsolete in the society. Indeed, if we stay with old things, there will be no new inventions and advancement of the world. Delving further into the issue reveal that the continuous needs in people's spirits can really push our society forwards. Actually, human beings live in a modern society so we should have the desire to be in pursuit of a new life. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that people who persist on experiencing different new things have been more successful in their professional and personal life due to the fact this desire provide an opportunity for them to face many chances.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that since the dawn of civilization people always have been looking for success in their everyday life. Broadly speaking, try new things in life will provide fertile ground for people to make a progress and reach their pinnacle of their life. In fact, hardly can obsolete things make people satisfied and patronize them in order to move forwards. To put it in other word, newest products not only can encourage people to keep their incentive to continue but also can lead a society to make a progress and become successful. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, in some case it is better to stick with old products because of financial problems. We all know that price goes up day in day out thank to the inflation and if people do not take financial background into account, they will find themselves in trouble. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there are different opinion toward old and new objects when it comes to people satisfaction with their properties. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that people need to be up to dated and try to experience various things in order to achieve their dreams. Additionally, not until people saturated with newest objects can they become successful in their life. I highly suggest that due to the many beneficial aspects, people should always keep up with new products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...t since the dawn of civilization people always have been looking for success in their everyday l...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the newest'.
Suggestion: , the newest
...o move forwards. To put it in other word, newest products not only can encourage people ...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the newest'.
Suggestion: with the newest
...dditionally, not until people saturated with newest objects can they become successful in t...
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Line 7, column 508, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould always keep up with new products.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'broadly speaking', 'in fact', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213716108453 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.162679425837 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1004784689 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0685805422648 0.046263068375 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0574162679426 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11961722488 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0334928229665 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70688841442 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0478468899522 0.0309702414327 154% => OK
Particles: 0.00637958532695 0.00188951952338 338% => OK
Determiners: 0.066985645933 0.0887237588012 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0255183413078 0.0209618222197 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00797448165869 0.0139019557991 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3395.0 2387.08602151 142% => OK
No of words: 576.0 408.028673835 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89409722222 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355902777778 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244791666667 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170138888889 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119791666667 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70688841442 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.4388145379 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2904661392 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.458333333 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 48.4791666667 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.27071823204 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118227163512 0.300154397459 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118587641343 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0677409619101 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484786324016 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126277583676 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507145303878 0.114077575197 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397638195658 0.0781384742642 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.472311623149 0.336927656856 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0416738018344 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938682716349 0.210909579961 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279222557868 0.0618886996521 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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