People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I attend college or university beacuse of career preparation rather then new experiences increased knowledge and so on. There are three diffirent kind of reasons why do I attend college or university.
Firstly, college or university provide to great job for everyone who is graduated from these kind of the education level. For example, if I did not graduate from university, I will not chance find a job which has high salary. This salary give me a great life condition such as living in huge house which in center of the Istanbul city. Moreover I can buy everything I want beacuse of my salary. However, if I had not graduated from university or college, I wound not found a job. In this circumstance, I had decided to go university, when I was a student at high school.
Secondly, university or college improve my culture and this culture gives me great statues and this statues provide change my social area. For instance, I had been living in small town when I was child and I had friends who had not great families. These families and friends created my social area, but they had not enough knowledge about university, so if I had not graduated from university, I would not been able to escape these kind of people. However, I had decided to change my live situation and I graduated form university and I could be able to change my social area. I managed to met with great people which is employeer in same company with me.
Thirtly, university or college contributes to early retirement and other workers. Moreover people will be able to survive who are graduated from university or college in Turkey. On the contrast a person could not survive,if he or she only graduated form high school or some related degrees beacuse Istanbul city has high level cost of live. In this circumstance the person has to work, despite he or she retired. For example, I am sharing my desk with other employeer who is working even retire beacuse he has not enough money for survive in Istanbul.
In the conclusion, these three reasons people could attend university or college for great salary, socail area and beauty retirement in terms of economic. In this condition people just care their future and it is begin with university or college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...ty beacuse of career preparation rather then new experiences increased knowledge and...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...ge and so on. There are three diffirent kind of reasons why do I attend college or u...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
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...e which in center of the Istanbul city. Moreover I can buy everything I want beacuse of...
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...this culture gives me great statues and this statues provide change my social area. ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
... to early retirement and other workers. Moreover people will be able to survive who are ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...people just care their future and it is begin with university or college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74550128535 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66635136903 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460154241645 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1107021329 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241890188863 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863095351724 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895962486237 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187637675291 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116005357111 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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