People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world today has witnessed huge demand for the need of education. To satisfy these needs, numerous universities and schools have been built since the last century offering diverse choices for education. Personally, I strongly believe that every student should attend university. Entering a university is a promising step into the world of opportunities accompanied by a strong desire for distinction and excellence. There are various reasons for attending universities but some specific ones are the most prevalent today according to the viewpoint of most of the people.
First, attending a university can earn a student with a degree and/or a diploma. This by default leads to a distinct, respected and a well-paid profession. For example, earning a diploma or a degree in engineering can offer student with a huge range of opportunities in this technologically advanced world. Nowadays the unemployment crisis is common in every country in the world even the most developed countries. So the ease of finding a job plays an important role for a student to decide on whether to attend a university.
Second, people today desire for more education. University offers a higher level of education and has all the facilities and resources for people who crave for knowledge. Learning is the key to improve and develop ourselves. So, higher education helps to widen our understanding, enhance our knowledge and in turn, increase our intellectual abilities.
Apart from these reasons there is also a well know thing all over the world called career preparation. Attending university for higher education can offer students to seek their career in various field like in science, business, law, arts, humanities, etc. It is believed that qualifications, ideas, in-depth knowledge and opportunities offered by the universities make their attending imperative. Many a time, a three or a four year diploma or degree may be the beginning of the moves one may make in order to accomplish best for their career.
Finally, moving to a university also bring in a host of responsibilities on an individual. Most of the times universities which we desire to attend are located at places away from our homes. So, moving away from our parents and living independently brings us with new responsibilities and experiences. Apart from that, students can have a sense of personal freedom which is of great importance. Also, entering a university offers us to meet new people and be friends with people from diverse backgrounds, cultures, ethnicity, and races. Such an opportunity gives immense exposure to socializing with different kinds of people.
In sum, the motto of students is to harvest knowledge and being educated, so it is obvious that everyone can find a reason for attending university.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26905829596 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11241776152 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522421524664 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.938040015 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.84 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232655812753 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677733596153 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556696036939 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125065281041 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302169293905 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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