People attend college or university for many different reasons.Why do you think people attend college or university?
Recently, in Mongolia, the eighty-percent of students who have graduated their highschool always attending to the universities.Because college can be a second home to students as well as the place that prepare us in our future career and occupation.Personally, I think that people who are willing to study in univerities have a plenty of reasons to attend.For example, socializing with others, preparing for their career, and developing their personal talents.
First of all, in my point of view most of the students need to have an ability to socialize with others at ease. Recently, the communication is the main factor to catch a good job position. Therefore, the university provides us with the opportunities to communicate with others.For example, I have a freshman friend, who just stepped into her first course of college. She said although she felt inhabited initially, with the help of volunteer work which always created from the university officials, finally she managed to introduce herself to other students.Therefore, as you can see, college will always be there for you if you have a problem with socializing.
Also, considering the colleges' purpose, I find it has a goal to prepare students for their future career. The university will open a new door to students. Most of the freshman's have never felt about an institute's life. Therefore, they will find it interesting. Besides that, if students do not have a future goal or something like that, institutions will help them to find their real dream depending upon their interests. For instance: my mother once said me that she hasn't had a dream when she was stepping into her freshman class. However, with the help of her english teacher he found her eventual dream. Thus, I knew that the university is a place to prepare students for their future.
Finally, institutions will help to their students to develop their special talents which has not been discovered depending on their habitat or interests. Universities has a plenty of courses to learn some new things. For example: the guitar class, piano class, or even can be a basketball lessons. As for me, I learnt from the university how to play a chess. Although some people says that chess is just a boring intellectual game, I found it very interesting. Hence, with the help of chess my mind has expanded and I have learned how to think outside the box.
All in all, people attending to college or universities for many reasons that I have mentioned above. As you can see, institution is the place where we can communicate with each other, prepare for our future career and proffesions, also it is a place we can truly understand our real talents which has not been discovered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, of course, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96035242291 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04319527373 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482378854626 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.4411169398 48.9658058833 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.238095238 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225086986749 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700689064591 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877786452726 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140010583345 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045829754835 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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