People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?
The way and style that people wear their clothes is one of the important things that show characteristics of them. It is possible that some people behave differently when they use different clothes, but also you can see a person in different clothes without any changing in his/her behavior. In my view, clothes have influence on behavior of people for two important reasons.
The main reason is that people look different when they change their clothes. When you put on different clothes, you think that people watch you differently, and so you change your behavior. My brother’s experience is a compelling example of this. He took a trip last year to Turkey for fun but he had forgotten picking comfortable clothes to wear during his trip. So he had to wear suit that he had worn. He says that during a week that he was in Istanbul he wasn’t comfortable with his suit and he didn’t have fun because he thought that people was watching him as a business man not a tourist and so he conformed his behavior. As you can see, others opinion about our clothes has effect on us and because of that we use different clothes and behave differently.
Another reason is that you wear clothes based on work that you do. People wear different clothes when they are in different situations. For example when you want go to a gym, you wear sport clothes and when you work in an office or you are in a meeting, your suit is mandatory. I remember that when I was working for an export/import company, I attended a formal meeting that all men were in suit except one of them which had worn casual clothes. I remember that during the meeting he was uncomfortable and in stress because he was distinguished in meeting room. This example shows that we have to wear suitable clothes for different situations.
In conclusion, even though some people think that kind of clothing doesn’t influence the behavior of them, I strongly oppose this idea because people look you differently when you wear different clothes and also you have to wear suitable clothes based on your working condition. Finally, I can say that we have to be meticulous about our clothes because It has influence on our confidence and can change the attitude of people to you.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72519083969 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71634427953 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419847328244 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8807780486 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476075596315 0.236089414692 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189797195783 0.076458572812 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168260405366 0.0737576698707 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356936107803 0.150856017488 237% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899615014866 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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