Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.

us">our appearance is an important part of our lives. our clothes and our fashion can easily changeour behavior. so, the way of thinking about us depend on how we will show ourselves to others. In my point of view, person is wearing what he want and people can think about the person how he behave himself. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

us">first of all, the way of dressing depend on person’s mood and temper. when human dresses sport wears, he will feel free and behave himself as he want. but when person is located in official place such as at work, meeting, he behave in the other way. my own experience is compelling example of this. when I am at school and wearing uniform, I behave myself calmly and non-talkative. but when I am found with my friends, I am wearing sportwears and free dresses.

us">secondly, us">our clothes often determine what people think about us and how they treat us. If you wear strange clothes, people may stare at you as you ‘re an insane. For instance, when someone will come and teach something. first of all , I will look for clothes. secondly, for manners and how he behaves. so, with these ways I can understand how he will teach me.

us">In conclusion, I strongly believe that person can behave differently only because of clothes. There are two reasons which I explored in the essay. us" style="mso-bidi-font-family:Calibri; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-latin;color:#333333;mso-ansi-language:EN-us"> us">

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26104417671 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.74349858536 2.67179642975 215% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9789911726 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.45 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172014600221 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545065994111 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535519429983 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103075575821 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382460807439 0.0645574589148 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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