Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others prefer to prepare and eat food in their own home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Every people have their own tasting preferences and which they are choosing better. Personally, I believe that eating at home is more comfortable and tastier. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore on the following essay.
First of all, I think that eating at home is more safety and healthier. In our country we have so many restaurants and so many locations where we can eat, but if you prefer to eating one hundred percent safety food you can eat domestic food. For example, when I am eating at home, I can surely eat that is clean and fresh. Furthermore, I am trying to eating at home more than in a fast food or on other places. because at home you can cook by yourself, also eating as much as you want. restaurants and other places we can eat ones a month or with colleagues for special meeting, but otherwise eating at home will be better for your health. when I was a child, I am always like to eat a soup that make my mother, and because of that I really like to eat domestic foods and trying to always eating at home
Secondly, people who really like to save money and cost-effective, for that people it will be more beneficial. Why so many people like to at home? because they are understand that for one dinner in a restaurant you can making this dinner twice or more. For instance, my sister when she is studying in an university, cooking at dormitory and leaving the food in the fridge and she is not going to fast food. Friends of my sister always eating at fast food and spend lot of money for food. Eventually, my sister starting to understand them that they are can aslo cook and they are trying to safe their money and eating more healthy food. Nowadays many of the students starting cook by themselves and really understand that it has lot of benefits.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that eating at home is more safety because you are understand what you are eating and surely eat that are is safety. this is because you are spend less money for your food, less than in a restaurants and fast foods. I am strongly believe that eating at home have lot of benefits that people should understand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every people have their own tasting preferenc...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...preferences and which they are choosing better. Personally, I believe that eating at h...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eat'?
Suggestion: eat
... where we can eat, but if you prefer to eating one hundred percent safety food you can...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...than in a fast food or on other places. because at home you can cook by yourself, also ...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Restaurants
...rself, also eating as much as you want. restaurants and other places we can eat ones a mont...
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Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...at home will be better for your health. when I was a child, I am always like to eat ...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...al. Why so many people like to at home? because they are understand that for one dinner...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...eople like to at home? because they are understand that for one dinner in a restaurant you...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
... for one dinner in a restaurant you can making this dinner twice or more. For instance...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ance, my sister when she is studying in an university, cooking at dormitory and le...
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Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canned'.
Suggestion: canned
...arting to understand them that they are can aslo cook and they are trying to safe t...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
... at home is more safety because you are understand what you are eating and surely eat that...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ting and surely eat that are is safety. this is because you are spend less money for...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... are is safety. this is because you are spend less money for your food, less than in ...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...staurants and fast foods. I am strongly believe that eating at home have lot of benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41414141414 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43518547615 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409090909091 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2356688189 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320182209779 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124275459099 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643264716104 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222496740302 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065590460501 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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