By and large, persons can get a variety of benefits from traveling either in their own region or foreign country. In this regard, while numerous individuals assert that traveling in their native country is beneficial, I personally believe that visiting other states is highly valuable since everyone not only can get familiar with various cultures but also can see beauties of the world.
In general, traveling to foreign areas is lucrative. The most significant reason that should be taken into account is that general public are faced with a large number of customs. As it is clear, every country or even every city in the world has specific traditions, cultures, lifestyles and etc. These sorts of differences can be greatly appealing for strange ones. On the other hand, getting familiar with them can be achieved by a considerable number of approaches, the major of which is traveling to these spots. The matter of this fact is that persons can observe and also experience them closely. However, every person virtually have an amount of information in terms of their own country's customs. For example, two years ago, I traveled to India in order to recognize its cultures and ceremonies. On that travel, I knew that every tribe of the Indian has special god such as sun, cow, sculpture and etc. In addition, I watched their rituals for worshiping. Nevertheless, never can I obtain these precious pieces of information and experiences through traveling in my own country.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that with traveling to overseas, general population have a huge chance to see varieties of beauties, attractions and artworks of the world. Obviously, every nation is known for its natural settings, monumental buildings and etc. With going to these areas, individuals gradually could visit the entire world. Furthermore, every nation has its own art style. With traveling to sundry parts of the world, persons will encounter these methods. In other words, it can be a profitable source of inspiration for artists, historians and etc. For example, I am an architect. Last year I traveled to Turkey for one of my projects. With visiting the Turkey's museums and mosques, I attained a large number of points of view regarding ancient architecture.
All in all, whether persons benefit more from traveling in their own country than form traveling to foreign states has turned into the huge debate among investigators. In this case, I strongly hold that traveling to unfamiliar locations is useful owing to an excessive number of reasons, two of which are perceiving different customs and observing magnificent environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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... and observing magnificent environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, for example, in addition, in general, such as, by and large, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16009280742 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79375398743 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538283062645 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7353322564 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9583333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95833333333 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298160090172 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836593152365 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113653319602 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220095514661 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109425797933 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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