People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

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People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

Maintaining our health is one of the most effective ways of ensuring that we live a long and happy life. I do many things in order to stay fit, but the most important is maintaining a healthy diet. There are two main reasons why I think this is critically important, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, eating healthy food prevents obesity, which is the cause of many very serious illnesses. Obesity is debilitating all by itself, but it also causes patients to suffer from a variety of other illnesses, including diabetes, arthritis and heat disease. It is important to be aware of this connection when making decisions about the food which we eat. My eldest cousin is a compelling example of this. While my cousin maintained a healthy weight throughout high school and university (despite eating a lot of unhealthy snacks and junk food), when he entered adulthood his metabolism changed and he began to rapidly gain weight. My cousin is not a particularly self-conscious individual and was never bothered by how this weight gain affected his appearance, so he continued to eat an unhealthy diet. However, he was eventually diagnosed with adult-onset diabetes which has had a profound effect on his quality of life. As a result, he regrets not being more careful about his dietary choices.
Secondly, eating healthy food gives me a lot of energy, which keeps me effective in my personal and professional pursuits. It is no secret that people who lack certain vitamins and nutrients do not have the energy necessary to complete even single tasks. I recall how when I was a university student I often skipped meals because I was quite busy studying. As a result of not eating proper meals. I started to suffer from fatigue and lethargy. My grades began to drop because when it came time to write my tests I could barely keep my eyes open long enough to answer the questions. Moreover, my assignments were poorly done because my fatigue made me unable to keep up with deadlines. The following year I was a bit more diligent about making healthy food choices and my grades quickly recovered.
In conclusion, the most important thing I do in order to stay healthy is maintain a nutritious diet. This is because keeping a healthy diet prevents obesity and related diseases, and because it gives me the energy to keep up with my academic and professional requirements.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eals because I was quite busy studying. As a result of not eating proper meals. I ...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
... thing I do in order to stay healthy is maintain a nutritious diet. This is because keep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83170731707 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76411632966 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0510428474 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0785202428843 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301660361828 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605769431064 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070120317392 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522041920469 0.0645574589148 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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