In the modernization and globalization world many things become stressful to us even the using of phone, televisions, lead us to feel stress, so in my opinion to get rid of this stress reding books it's the fastest way to feel relax. The following discussion reveals my view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that reading books or magazine or anything leads us to use our brain in this way, and put it a way from stressful things, in addition to that i feel i used my brain in useful thing not only to waste my time.
Another reason that deserve some words, when i read story, i imagine myself one of the characters,moving with the main character movement, i felt each word in the story, with a lot of emotions and feeling, in addition to all of that i 've got a lot of experience from that story and many of solutions if i 'll face the same problem.
Last but not least, reading is my favorite thing to do, we can put all of our negativity to read and then we can go back to our routinely life with 100% percent refreshing work, i felt all my blood moving inside my body, taking oxygen to our brains, from my perspective it is the best friend to a lot of people when they are sad or feeling stressful.
In conclusion, many people are using different thing to get rid of stress, furthermore stress is unhealthy issue that we should use things to leave it away.My best friend in this situation is the book, i prefer to read it so no more westing time, get more knowledge, furthermore i felt the story, i lived it , put me far a way from my world, finally i think reading book makes me feel better.
reding books it's the fastest way to feel relax.
reading books is the fastest way to feel relaxing.
Another reason that deserve some words
Another reason that deserves some words
are using different thing
are using different things
stress is unhealthy issue
stress is an unhealthy issue
Sentence: In the modernization and globalization world many things become stressful to us even the using of phone, televisions, lead us to feel stress, so in my opinion to get rid of this stress reding books it's the fastest way to feel relax.
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Sentence: In conclusion, many people are using different thing to get rid of stress, furthermore stress is unhealthy issue that we should use things to leave it away.My best friend in this situation is the book, i prefer to read it so no more westing time, get more knowledge, furthermore i felt the story, i lived it , put me far a way from my world, finally i think reading book makes me feel better.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
Need to learn to put proper punctuation marks and transition phrases for two sentences, for example:
reading is my favorite thing to do, we can put all of our negativity to read and then we can go back to our routinely life with 100% percent refreshing work, i felt all my blood moving inside my body
Reading is my favorite thing to do. We can put all of our negativity to read and then we can go back to our routinely life with 100% percent refreshing mind. In addition (or moreover), i felt all my blood is moving inside my body
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1271 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.154 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.405 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 51 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.833 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.513 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.882 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.258 0.07
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