People learn things better from those at their own level- such as fellow students or co workers- than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Depending
...m someone is depends on who is teaching.Depending on personel experience, personel type o...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...oncern, we find that, some people learn better from those at their own level, meanwhil...
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Suggestion: to better; to well
...their own level, meanwhile others learn better from those at a higher level.From my po...
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Suggestion: From
...arn better from those at a higher level.From my point of view, I disagree the statem...
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Suggestion: to better; to well
...isagree the statement that people learn better from those at their own level rather th...
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...ther than from those at a highter level.My arguments on this statement are listed ...
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...rience is very significant for teaching.To illustrate this point, I want to refer ...
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...ife experience when I was at university.I had a term project for my system simula...
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...course and had a group for this project.In the beginning of our project, I had som...
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...s about on my duty of the group project.Then, I had asked them to another group stud...
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...e questions in first time of their life.However, when I had asked same questions to my ...
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...had asked same questions to my professor,he solved my questions and tought me very ...
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... questions and tought me very smart way.In that time, I had observed that he solve...
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...tudent like me had asked him as like me.Therefore, this is a prove that experience is ver...
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...asked him as like me.Therefore, this is a prove that experience is very important when ...
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...statement is that perspective of people.It is a very important point that teaching...
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...aching someone requires to looking from their their perspective instead of just looking you...
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...ad of just looking your own perspective.For example, according to my mathematics pr...
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...ly when teacher teached them by looking students perspective to understand which ways st...
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...e mathematical equations with easy ways.Hence, it is crucial that teaching methods ca...
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...king of others perspective. In a word,perspective of people and experiences are very sign...
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Suggestion: learning
...very significant for teaching and allow to learn easy.Taking account of all these points...
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...nt for teaching and allow to learn easy.Taking account of all these points, we may rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0517662725 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.1344086022 452% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.538532785 48.9658058833 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 468.0 100.406767564 466% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.0 20.6045352989 442% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.75 5.45110844103 381% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274724591695 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178254964237 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20057190444 0.0737576698707 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178254964237 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20057190444 0.0645574589148 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.3 11.7677419355 410% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.89 58.1214874552 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 10.1575268817 382% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.01818996416 141% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.0537634409 382% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 39.0 10.247311828 381% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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