People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
I strongly believe that people should do whatever they think it is well-suited for them. Performing a job which you are uncomfortable with could be so much annoying. However, nowadays there are so many reasons that people do jobs which they don’t like.
First, people may perform something because of their financial status. For example, one of my friends was an accountant and he hated the job but he continues its career anyway. This made me very curious and I asked him about the reason of it, he told me that there is no other job for him in city if he quit his current job and he is from a poor family that provides three other people from this occupation.
Another reason that can force a person to do an uncomfortable job is his ambition for achieving higher positions in his or her job or to get to a place which he has the ability to change the common rules to alter the job to something more enjoyable for other persons accepting it after him.
Sometimes people decided to do a specific career due to their medical conditions. As you know, there are some special and severe jobs that affect a person’s health. They must change their career whether they enjoy it or not.
Finally, performing an unbearable and tedious work may be not interesting for the persons that accepted it. However, it can benefit him due to many reasons which should be considered. If someone looks at the bigger picture and consider all the influential factors he may decide to try enjoying his current occupation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69662921348 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5991645875 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5534471853 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202167253016 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088257245008 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989970485219 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130254987335 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976201132493 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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