People work because they need money to live. What are some reasons that people work?
Throughout the history of humankind, people working supply their needs to have the best lives in the daily life. A controversial question raises in this issue is that people work only to earn money. In my opinion, I think that people have various interests to something in their lives so that people try to reach some wishes, which have been fostered in their mind then get that along working. With this regard, I explain my reasons hereunder about some other reasons that people like to work.
First and foremost, nowadays, many people suffering from the poverty condition around the world need some foods and supplements to save them from this catastrophic situation. In order to, some people like people, who are needing help to be happy, however, are deprived of some facilities. Therefore, some people working some NGOs bring a delight time for these people throughout the world. Although they earn enough money from this job, according to their activities, poor people can be saved from this situation to live better than past. Additionally, these people are thinking about other people must have a life with peacefulness and happiness, for satisfying this notion they choose a job with a charitable attribute to help people.
Another reason arose in my mind that people are always seeking their interests to pave the way for flourishing them. Ordinary, they think that when they are moving toward the ideal goal or appealing wishes, these matters cannot fulfill their needs to money or provide enough money. On the other hand, achieving interests and following desire can give opportunities that people foster their abilities to reach more advantages. For example, many people living in my country have the attitude toward teachers have a low salary and someone who chooses this career as a job can be precarious his economic future, but my friend takes this job for his passion. With many efforts leads him to win the award of the best teacher of a year, which is very precious and valuable, and takes it from the minister education of my country. Pursuing interests in their jobs give a guarantee that everyone reaches the zenith of prosperity and flourishes his abilities.
All in all, many people have this notion people work for money and ignore other aspects of life, but I prefer that people consider all aspects of a job to not only help other people that have an enjoyable time but also reach their wishes in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... order to, some people like people, who are needing help to be happy, however, are deprived...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92961165049 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44238323869 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51213592233 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2231653296 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.9375 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394419820895 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156816386284 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962895784266 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283333799265 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106975141256 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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