Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: books are not needed any more because people can read information on computers.
In the contemporary, information is the best material for the all of people, who live in the world, because they need know everything are connected with them, such as science, high technology, and biology, to name but a few. However, they can get these by the reading varied books, the surveying in different concepts, and the experimenting phenomena. Furthermore, an important section, to begin with, they obtain data from books in libraries or on computers. I, in my opinion, prefer by demonstrating several obvious reasons, for example reducing book price, protecting from environment, and the access of easy are the best causes due to they can get information on computers.
Todays, by enhancing population, requests for buying books are increasing, and in doing so, need more labors and facilities to prepare a lot of books. Despite this, reading books on the computers no longer relate to the printing industry, also e-book cost is very low and don’t need any labor and factory, for providing books, and copy them.
Another privilege, generating abundant greenhouse gases, mankind needs to preserve trees, ocean, river, animals, and fresh air. Thus, the most important substance making paper is a wood. Cutting trees to provide woods is a worse work for the environment. According, reading the information on computers can salvage vegetation life in the forest, and maintain jungles for the future generations. Moreover, protect from jungles and trees help to decreas greenhouse gases, stability world climate, and ceasing increasing the average world temperature.
Some of people prefer to read books, which can touch them and carrying everywhere, and in so doing, cause some of pain in the spine of body’s people, for long time bearing heavy books by their backpacks, probably make of prevalent arthritis disease in the society. Hence, people like can easily access it everywhere and use its every time. In additional, learning information is memorable by reading on computer can more appropriate, for visual effects and sufficient sounds by the company of learning data. By doing so, kids and children are taught very comfortable and easy.
In my summery, perhaps first seem, reading book conveys to people historic sense. On the other hand, but also are people reading information on computer have a lot of profits as are said, but people are accessing a library in their computers as well. Accordingly, the best choice in the 21 century is one’s choice can less book price, protect from environment, and easy access.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23227383863 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81774631343 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574572127139 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2346519811 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.888888889 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 5.45110844103 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287711121597 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811013263752 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461626099691 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151750054066 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458644409711 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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