It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
There is no doubt that nowadays, any events happening in the world play crucial role in people’s lives. No one can deny the influential of phenomena in the world in daily lives. A controversial question arises about this issue why people must know about this? Some people have this idea that knowing about any events in the world are more useful; however, some belief that the people can overlook about this events, I subscribe first idea and will explain about with my reasons hereunder.
First, in the contemporary, by improving technology and knowledge of mankind about consuming fuel, environment might be more endangered with using all of resources from the earth dramatically. By doing so, everyone can know about this issue, which do not arise problem for people who easily ignoring the massive and huge issue. With this regard, every people are trying to acquire any information, and with this data is informed to another people living in the world can do an impressive work as a manager for the earth. With this cooperation, when people being more unify, every problem in the massive magnitude can be solved only with collaborating each other to get a clean earth as soon as. As a result, knowing about any world changing can improve and provide a permanent live in every era for mankind
Another reasons, every phenomenon can affect events which the people are thinking no relation in between them. For example, the price of oil in the world is affected with the lot of factors such characteristic of oil, politics, and even wars. Every people in the world thinks no relation between price of oil; however, knowing about that are helped people how they are confronting with the changing price of oil in the world and even what phenomenon can changing price of tools. In order to, every technology and industry is affected by price-changing of oil, and their products price are changed with this effects. Therefore, acquiring any information and data can help people to predict any alteration in their work. With a decent data-bank for any investment, can pave the way for prosperous.
All in all, knowing about phenomena not only help people to how managing any changing in the world, but also they can be more unify as consistent group to acquire a clean environment in the near future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90025575448 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61284960883 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6199005153 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.733333333 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180045665649 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740116247575 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542425234841 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127048581128 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539764217237 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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