A person should never make an important decision alone.
Humans thrive on social interaction and depend on each other. Together, humans can accomplish the greatest of challenges and whereas working alone leaves you high and dry and lonely. I strongly believe that a person should never make an important decision alone for the following two reasons. I will substantiate my opinions in the following paragraphs and justify my reasoning.
First of all, I critically believe that a person should always consult his close and loved ones before making any crucial decision in their life. The best decisions are carried out when people go through the pros and cons of the whole issue. In my opinion, consulting parents is the greatest step in carrying out a life changing decision since they genuinely care about you and might have gone through the same situation multiple times in their life. For example, after my graduation, I had an idea about startup while at the same time I had received a lucrative job offer. I whole-heartedly wanted to pursue my startup and make it a roaring success but my parents made me understand the whole situation with profound clarity. They suggested to do the job for some time and on the sidelines, continue to pursue my passion. This way, I would have some capital to begin my journey of the startup and some experience and contacts in the industry to have a better start. This helped me understand the consequences of my decision and realise the importance of consulting people and taking their feedback on any decision.
Secondly, some people are too proud to accept anybody else's opinion to take important decision. These kind of people ae full of vain and pride. Moreover, they fail to understand the overall magnitude of the important decision they carry out alone. Whenever a persons asks another person for help, they tend to include them in their personal lives and talk freely about everything without feeling judged. The people who are too arrogant to ask for help in making decisions are never able to talk to other people since they always give themselves more priority than others. Eventually this not only leads to their downfall in life but they are left with no true connections in life to whom they can talk. These people tend to become nervous and are unable to communicate articulately. Hence, taking decisions alone can prove disastrous and also indicate the personality of a person.
To conclude, I would strongly reiterate the notion that people should not make decisions on their own since they are never fully aware of the consequences of the decision. Instead, by taking other peoples opinion, you get exposed to vivid ideas which could help you make a well informed decision.
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...help you make a well informed decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0110619469 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59579090704 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519911504425 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7705392649 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.954545455 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311670452787 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932108842114 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138365132018 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21032318456 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746977947634 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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