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Nowadays, due to developments of technologies and economy, many people can get more income than in the past, which allows them to spend surplus money on other things, such as hobby, travel. A lot of people often use the money to buy pets. However, with the demand for goods of pets, their price gradually becomes expensive. Thus, there is a controversy about whether spending on pets is good. Some people think that the utility of what expend a lot of the money to tame has boundaries. Consuming pets or their items is not a waste of money because people can relieve their stress, grow their social skills, and be helped with many things by pets.
First of all, people will vastly improve interpersonal skills through taming pets. This is because domesticating animals necessarily requires people's hands, and in this process, they will learn how to communicate and cooperate effectively by overcoming their ingoing personality. As time passes, more and more companies are inclined to hire people to be not only specialists in their own fields but also to be skilled in social interaction for cooperation. In fact, a lot of enterprises consider social interaction abilities as one of the key qualities for successful group projects. As for my sister, for instance, my timid sister started to take care of a dog to remove her ashamed character. By talking with her dog, she could develop a sense of courage. As a result, she could make friends easier with her social and collaboration skills. Furthermore, she would get a job at a top advertising agency after just a few years since the interviewers recognized her social skills and collaboration skills. Had it not been for her dog, she would not have been able to develop herself into such a sociable and capable person. It becomes clear with the example that taming pets are beneficial for being outgoing and improving their sociability.
Besides the advantage for pets to be a remedial book to learn social skills, the more significant reason is that people will build good health, helping them to work better in the end. Nowadays, competitive due to the employment difficulty and the economic crisis, called Great Lockdown caused by Covid-19, since contemporary society is, it is inevitable for youngsters to get psychological burden and pressure from beat their brain out; this drudgerous situation disturbs the people from focusing and working hard. Furthermore, currently, young people today live alone, do, most of them often feel lonely. The best way for people to recover their exhausted minds and bodies is to tame pets. In fact, one study that experimented with the possibility of what domesticating animals helps people diminish their stress shows that pets can aid people to unwind about their works and the feeling of loneliness. The researcher demonstrated that groups of people who tame pets tend to increase dopamine, known as the happiness hormone, accomplish their affairs well-oiled by recuperating the environment in their bodies. Such results clearly depict that since, by ameliorating their psychological or physical conditions, the capability to complete people’s work do pets enhance, important is what tames animals.
In conclusion, investing in pets helps is enough valuable, enhancing the quality of people's life. People can reduce their stress, and after all, when taking their pets, people can take their mind off their works and relaxing them physically and psychologically from feeling lonely. The better states help people to work more efficiently. In addition, they can learn communication skills by disciplining their pets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... be helped with many things by pets. First of all, people will vastly improve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, after all, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3035.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 585.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18803418803 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83373538806 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 927.0 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1220757896 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.407407407 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40740740741 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136755839386 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530994760271 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861297969228 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100607290699 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476277239268 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 86.8835125448 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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