In modern days, children can use the distinctive entertainment tools or programs so they relish in their childhood. The majority of kids have a vast interest to computer games, which can have pro and con consequences. Hence, parents should control their kids to not play computer games. From my point of view, i strongly agree that children should be forced to not play such games, it is because that they squander their valuable times to meaningless games,while not all games are worst.
To begin with,children can gain vast advantages by playing computers. The major benefit of playing computer games is improving mental ability and creativeness. The games, not all of them, have special contexts, such as academic subject games, or football games, and this context help children to improve their grades.
On the other hand, there are plethora evidences that force me to agree that kids should not be allowed to play computer games. The first reason is that as children play games as soon as they addict to that games and it leads to waste their time. In additionally, they can miss the vital and valuable parts of the life. For example, it is fact that addicted person is immobile, and at his birthday parties he will be in front of computer. As a result, the most important occasion he would miss.
Secondly, this motionless will also affect to kids studies. Giving example of my brother, he is addicted to computer games, which influences him to get lower marks from hiss studies. Thus, our parent have takne some serious measues. Consequently, for not see kids like a dead person , parents should not allow to waste their time with games,that are not included physical movements.
To sum up, wasting time in front of computer as playing games can have positive impact, while drawbacks outweigh the benefits of this statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94498381877 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58824686849 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6921942303 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8823529412 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400916192869 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126077181913 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118184682154 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235414351036 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759151098775 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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