Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Nowadays, children can use different entertainment tools or programs so that they enjoy a lot in their childhood. Some of these programs like computer games have many fans between children. In this case, many parents deem that playing computer games is a waste of time. Hence, Children should not be allowed to play them. On the other hand, other people hold the opposite view. Although not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming, I agree with this idea that in spite of indisputable disadvantages of the computer games, they provide a good condition that help children and parents in various aspects. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To begin with, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that these games improve the creativity and hardworking of children. Due to this fact, they will be successful in the school because they have this ability to solve problems, like computer games that force them to try hard achieve the higher score. Moreover, it has a benefit for parents that they will have a few difficulties to help their children in their studies. Therefore, it is important that children play computer games at a distinctive time to develop some abilities.
Second, there is another reason that deserves some words. Today, these kind of games are very common among young children and it helps them to have a great time. To illustrate this fact, these games provide a condition that children show their emotions during playing games so that they release their energy in the safe game. In addition, parents can do their jobs without any worry about their children which may threaten them in other games. For example, in other games like football, children face some injuries during the game and it makes a problem for them and their parents.
However, it might not always true. No one could omit this fact that the computer games will make some physical problems like headaches and eye weakness if children spend a lot of time to play them. Besides, these problems might have a bad influence on their efficiency in the school.
All main points considered, it appears to be good to draw a reasonable conclusion that if parents control the time of playing computer games, these games will be useful for children. To summarize the reasons, not only do these games provide a great condition for children like increase their abilities and make them happy but also it has unlike advantages for parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, kind of, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9785202864 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56526278072 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491646778043 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3844965904 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426033673097 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146142839511 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151759590969 0.0737576698707 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272275269448 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576495236354 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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