Providing internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Providing internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
In the preceding years, due to the development of technology, the level of people's living conditions has been improved in different aspects. Also, Governments have been allocating funds to make progress in the level of communication among people. For instance, many people across the country have access to the internet. The question which arises here is whether it is beneficial that governments provide internet for all citizens at no cost. From my viewpoint, I believe that the internet should be provided freely for people. There are some reasons to illustrate this, two of which will be elucidated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, for providing equitable conditions for those who cannot afford the expense of the internet, the government should offer internet without any cost. Nowadays many people struggling with different financial problems cannot afford to have an expensive internet for their children, so the children cannot utilize from internet advantages and they will be left behind from promoting their knowledge, however, if the government offer free internet to all citizen, many family's problems will be solved and they will feel confident that their children can use the internet as other children. For instance, due to the pandemic disease spreading to many countries, many students should proceed their learning remotely by the internet.so the government has offered free internet for all people to made the situation much easier especially for students who cannot have access to the internet.
Moreover, providing free internet can guarantee economic growth in local businesses which in the long run can pave the way for society to reach the point of prosperity. internet is very important to those traveling to different countries because they want to be up to dated with information and they also want to use the internet to find their destination on the map but most of the time because of roaming, internet costs fortune for them, however offering free internet can be beneficial for these tourists and local people as well because tourists can get information that is needed for their trip. And due to tourist attraction, many more people will be eager to travel which can improve the local business.
In conclusion, if the government offer free internet to all citizen, everyone can benefit from it. Because for those families who cannot afford to provide internet for their children, free internet can reduce their problems and worries over their children's improvement. Also, this offer can be good for both tourists who need information for their trip and local people whose business will be progressed
because of the arrival of more tourists to their country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Internet
...ciety to reach the point of prosperity. internet is very important to those traveling to...
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Line 6, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people whose business will be progressed because of the arrival of more tourists ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28138528139 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6711359916 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452380952381 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.514197139 48.9658058833 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.5 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397759374179 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174318289014 0.076458572812 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199184709013 0.0737576698707 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294182401765 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.2655104603 0.0645574589148 411% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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