A glance at people's attitude towards the internet, brings light to a question that has been asked several times; whether government should give free internet access to every citizen. In my opinion with the development of technology internet has become a vital infrastructure facility similar to roads, electricity. I firmly believe that it is government should put effort to offer internet access to everyone for number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, internet can play a major role to enhance the current education system. Internet is an ocean of knowledge and it is the largest library in the globe. More importantly, most of the educational material available on the internet are free. By providing free access to internet, students can learn from best universities in the world without spending a penny. Furthermore, online learning has enable pupils live in rural areas to study competitively with pupils live in the capital. Internet has broken barriers for learning. If the government can provide internet access, then it will be an investment to develop education in the country.
This decision can benefits not only student, but also the work force that drives the economy. After the internet boom and development of related technologies, it created myriad of job opportunities. Web designing, Network Engineering are new fields that engenders directly as a result of the spread of internet. Additionally remote working facilities has enables other traditional jobs to restructure and expand in new dimensions. These opened new doors are especially beneficial to youths live in developing countries which lacks opportunities to horn their skills. With the internet, in my country there is a significant portion of the workforce work with international companies as remote workers. The knowledge and experience they acquire from working with industry giants can be use to develop similar industries in the country. This is beneficial to both government and the citizens to drive the country to economic prosperity.
Lastly, internet has enable new ways to communicate with people. For instance, when I was studying at an abroad university, I felt the loneliness and missed my parents a lot. However, after my parents learn to use video calling facility we daily talk with each other and seeing there faces erased all the problems from my mind.
In the current world, internet supply has gain same importance as a water supply. Internet has positive effects on field of education, work and even enhancing relationships. For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that government should grant free internet access to all of their citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: enabled
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Additionally,
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: enabled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, then, as to, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32558139535 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92722252192 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555813953488 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6280191796 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306452595342 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878586270098 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726513104025 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185433360153 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883819075203 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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