Some companies provide important products or service, but also damage environment. Some people believe that government should require more penalty, higher tax and larger fine of these companies, while others believe that there are better ways. Which do you prefer?
In the preceding years, due to the increasing population, many
companies are willing to produce different products for fulfilling people’s
essential needs, but these productions can have deleterious effects on
the environment in long run. So, some people hold this view that government’s role
is vital in resolving these matters as they can require more penalty and larger
fines with these companies to prevent companies from producing a huge amount of
waste in society, however, some others think that there may be other ways to solve
this issues. From my viewpoint, I believe that giving fines to these companies
would be beneficial. There some reasons to illustrate this, two of which will be
elucidated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, giving
penalties to companies can increase their awareness to follow environmental conservation
seriously. Nowadays, many big factories produce many different goods that sometimes
their waste exceeds the least waste allowed to be discharged to the environment,
therefore, not only can it affect negatively the environment but also it
can be dangerous for people’s health. However if the government imposes fines on
them, they will know that their performance is under the eye of everyone and
they have to change their procedure towards producing goods that make less
waste in the environment. For example, ten years ago, there was a company that it’s
primarily production was making clothes. For cooling its machines, the factory
used water from the river which made the river dirty. Then,
the government gave fines and penalties to this company to force them to change their
strategy in making less damage.
Moreover, some environmental issues are irreversible and it
takes a great deal of time that environment
restore itself, therefore, the only effective way is that that the government have to impose heavy
fines on that company.in the past few
years, global warming has been important among people because many countries
are willing to make a shift in people’s
living condition. so many factories are required to build facilities in the
country, however, this approach has some fundamental problems, as the air quality
has been affected severely, as a result, the earth temperature will arise in
near future, so for preventing this incident from continuing, the government
should impose severe punishment on the company because if they do not take this
matter seriously, its consequence will not be easily resolved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51269035533 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82423337537 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55076142132 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.289986192 48.9658058833 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.0 100.406767564 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.53405017921 772% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28019801672 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105226340259 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727781026707 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603186288027 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562375939403 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 58.1214874552 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.1575268817 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.