Question: Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.
Undoubtedly, any culture has a brilliant custom which is worth to spread all over the world. Iranian culture, which I appreciate it because it is my ancestor's lifestyle, is not an exception and includes many admirable components in it. If I wanted to choose one of them, I would pick the importance of respect to the parents. The reason for my choice is that it leads our children to keep this trait until the time that when we get old, so they will respect us as their parents. Moreover, learning to be respectful toward the parents, causes us to be grateful for others in every other relationship which we have in our life.
To begin with, since the next generation will act in the way that they saw we behaved, we can use this as a good force to teach them being respectful toward their parents. Due to the fact that we are their parents, it can be useful for ourselves as well. Therefore, we can enjoy seeing them how to appreciate our efforts when we need their help and attention.
Moreover, somebody who learns being thankful generalizes this quality toward other dears in his in her life. My personal experience is a proof of that. I grow up in a family that portrays the necessity of saying "Thank you.". As a result, being thankful has become as part of personality and I do the same admiration toward my teacher as well as my parents. In this way not only I have the support of my parents, but also my teacher.
In conclusion, I recommend everyone around the globe to be respectful toward their parents just like the costumery in my culture. I suggest it because of two reasons. First, the upcoming generation will learn to be obliged for their past generation. Second, it results in being grateful toward every dear person in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...ntion. Moreover, somebody who learns being thankful generalizes this quality towar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61904761905 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64676245136 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8974075664 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5882352941 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0413022627065 0.236089414692 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0151023272407 0.076458572812 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0149972183976 0.0737576698707 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0259160807595 0.150856017488 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136560527138 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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