Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some movies have a message on them, which offers the audience to think about it. On the other hand, some others designed to make the people who watch them have fun. I personally prefer to watch comedy movies. I feel this way for two reasons. First, I need something to make me laugh especially after a hard work day. Second, sometimes irony can be a fantastic way to convey a concept. Third, watching entertainment movies is a way of being familiar with different lifestyles, which are shown in the film.
To begin, in this modern world, due to the competition in almost all of the workplaces, people have less time to enjoy laughing. My personal lifestyle is an example of this. I do not advance in my job unless I am serious and striver. Most of the people are like me, so there is a drastic need for something fun in order to help people to relax. For this reason, I am enthusiastic to see a comedy with my family at the end of every busy day.
Moreover, who says that comedies can not make individuals think? I myself learned a lot from social comedy series like Pavarchin, which is one of the most popular series in my country. For instance, I thought about the importance of obeying rules when I saw an episode of this movie that shows the bad effect of breaking the rules in a modern city.
Finally, often amusing movies, walk the audience through stories of actors' lives. No matter where the movie has been conducted, you can understand something about the environment that the scenario happens in it. For example, when I watch Friends, I realize many things from a typical lifestyle in America and the factors that influence on a young person's living in the US.
All in all, I choose amusing shows rather than serious films because of three reasons: they are entertaining, informative and helpful to know about different cultures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...world, due to the competition in almost all of the workplaces, people have less time to en...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to amuse'.
Suggestion: to amuse
...ving in the US. All in all, I choose amusing shows rather than serious films because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, third, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64634146341 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55958150208 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3722292858 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2105263158 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206006197805 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568391785787 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617129807313 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960533525512 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697482687118 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.