Each kind of movie has its own fans and viewers. Personally, I disagree with the statement that it’s better to watch serious movies than comical ones. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will elaborate on in the following essay.
To begin with, serious movies might not be to everyone's taste. To be more specific, this kind of film requires us to think a lot and we have to concentrate on all details in plots. As a result, we may be really tired after watching them. For example, I watched a movie called “The Space Adventure”. The plot of this film was so complicated that I couldn’t enjoy watching it. Although I put all my effort into understanding the story and figuring out messages the director was trying to express, I ended up with confusion after watching it. I was so frustrated and regretted buying the ticket for it.
Furthermore, serious movies are not suitable for me to watch with my family. I have a younger brother who is only 5 years old. To spend quality time with all my family members, amusing movies are largely the first choice for us. We can laugh together, connect with each other, and create an enjoyable atmosphere. However, serious ones demand a very serious atmosphere without any noises and interruptions, so we can understand the story. Additionally, my little brother might not be able to enjoy the movie because the plot is too complicated for him. Accordingly, comic movies are definitely the better choice for us.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that movies for amusement or entertainment are better than serious ones that require a lot of thinking. This is because the comic movies are more relaxing and suitable for my family members.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81292517007 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72786783032 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8869801076 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4736842105 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182960878281 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667235159484 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051868700618 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137493131658 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436980635958 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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