Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
Travel in your own country is an exciting idea. You can focus on the beautiful that surround you and make friends close home. I personally considered this opportunity a heartwarming experience. You can grow as a human being and discover something new at the same time. Traveling my own nation is more beneficial that going outside your land. I agree with this statement because if comfort and gratification are your priorities, then domestic travel can mitigate the inconvenience of long flights, a potential language barrier and any financial barrier you might encounter in your trip.
First of all, it is always important understand the country in which you live, know your history and your heritage. By doing so you will have the possibility to know more in deep your culture. Additionally, your background will be widely expanded. You will enjoy these activities and will feel more relaxed. You won’t have to be stressed about expending a lot of money either.
Secondly, visiting your country have some other advantages. For example, no need to worry about the language barrier since it is your own language. This allow you to perfectly communicate during your trip. You can meet new friends, enjoy a movie, visit museums or simply travel with the companion of a guide without worries. You can also drive your own car, so you can travel for less.
Finally, if you have a busy schedule, you can fit your trip by combining long weekends and holidays. You can visit family and friends. Another advantage; no need of extra vaccinations since you are not traveling abroad. Those simple things can make your destination easy and more enjoyable and will inspire you to make future trips. For me this is very important. You can grow through traveling.
To conclude, I firmly agree that traveling in my own country instead visiting a foreign destination is better. People benefit more when travelling in their own country because it is safe, affordable and brings the opportunity to have new and exciting experiences.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74403470713 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.551390426 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29166666667 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322710434664 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101521177508 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652844219897 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204612266377 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489545647401 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.