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Undoubtedly, reading plays a significant role in many people's daily lives where they work or play. Some people like to buy books to read, while others like to borrow books from libraries or from other people. Both sides may have their own reasons to support their own views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that I prefer to borrow borrowing books from libraries or from other people to read. There are several reasons as follows.
To begin with, if people borrow books from libraries, they can read various books which theyI want to read. Since it does not cost any money to borrow books, people can try any books if they want to. On the other hand, since money is needed to buy books from book store, people should consider their budgets when they choose books to read which can be very limited to people who are not working, such as students. When this sort of freedom is followed, they can read many books as possible as they can. For example, when I was a high school student, I received only 50 dollars a month from my parents. Since I should spend my money on public transports, I had only a few amount of money to spend for on my entertainments. Soon later, I entered a high school, I read a novel named "Pride and Prejudice" written by Jane Austen, one of the best female English writers throughout the history. I really liked the book, so I went to the bookstore to buy other novels of her. However, I cannot buy more than one book because my budget was very limited. One day, I found a local library near my house which made it possible to borrow other books of Austen which made me a frantic fan of her and could read every book of her. Moreover, I could try other novels of English writer which was arranged near her books in on the shelves. Consequently, I became a voracious reader throughout my high school years. Without the local library near my house, I would not have been able to read various books.
Moreover, when people borrow books from other people, they are likely to read various genres of books. Since people have their own personal preference on genres, they can recommend each other great books of each genres. For example, during my high school years, I only read novels
because I liked fictional stories that I cannot experience while I get stressed to non-fictions. However, after I was accepted to a university, I met a lot of new friends from other circumstances. One of my friends was addicted to astronomy which made him to read a lot of books related to the field such as books written by Carl Sagan, Edwin Hubble, and Brian Green. In contrast, one of my friends who were majoring philosophy had read a lot of books written by western philosophers such as Plato, Marx and so on. They recommended a lot of books they liked and I could read several books other than novels by borrowing them from my friends. Without my friends, I would not have been able to consider reading such non-fictions which was a strong pressure to me because of their complexity.
In short, I strongly believe that the advantages of borrowing books from libraries or from other people far outweigh the advantages of buying books of based on the reasons I have mentioned above. All in all, the importance of reading cannot be overestimated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'few amounts'.
Suggestion: few amounts
...oney on public transports, I had only a few amount of money to spend for on my entertainme...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my high school years, I only read novels because I liked fictional stories that I...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...igh school years, I only read novels because I liked fictional stories that I cannot...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...igh school years, I only read novels because I liked fictional stories that I cannot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in contrast, in short, sort of, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2694.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58163265306 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49856963107 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425170068027 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8623077018 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251921192449 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10021592107 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949810735538 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185018242908 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330038407964 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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