When it comes to various rules that young people are required to follow, some people claim that those rules are too stringent. But in my opinion, the current rules are suitable, and vital for the young generation, for the following reasons.
To begin with, there are many types of rules enforced on young people. Family rules are one important instance, as most of the young people live with parents before college. For example, many children are required to go home immediately after school. Seemingly strict, this rule actually helps to prevent children from exposure to danger or negative temptation, like going to wild forests for adventure or to Internet bars to play video games. Such restrictions help to put students on the right track, that is, focusing on study. Other family rules, like respecting the old and cherishing the younger kids, contribute to the moral development of children, and the harmony of a family.
The second type of rules that worth mentioning, is school rules. One controversial rule of many high schools, is the compulsory wearing of school uniforms. This rule has its own merits. For example, it eliminates the differences of backgrounds of different students: rich and poor students cannot be distinguished by their clothing. Also, it curbs the tendency of unnecessary comparisons among students, to encourage them to spend more time on studying instead of caring about their appearances.
Other entities also have rules for young people: company rules for young employees; social norms for young members. Many rules are not only beneficial to the entity, but also for the sake of the well-being of young people. Laws about legal drinking age are advantageous to their physical and mental health. It is a common knowledge that drinking at an early age is detrimental and sometimes it leads to severe social problems like crimes.
Admittedly, some rules might be too strict and need refinements. But in general, rules are a foundation of societal stability, and have underwent testing by generations. Moreover, there is a distinction between rules and rule enforcement. Some rules, although strict, have never been performed exactly as prescribed. Who can check whether a student has watched online porn video which violates the school regulations? Therefore, it is reasonable to raise the level of restriction to prevent young people with their rebellious nature of breaking the rules from breaking the overall stability of society. In other words, the rules become robust when strengthened.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the rules for young people are not strict no matter in families, schools, and societies, and they are indispensable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, and strict rules are indispensable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25542168675 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79284696925 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1047949352 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2916666667 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30609467765 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919407388586 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895362710875 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193547984783 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957370270929 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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