Should children grow up in the countryside or city?
Should children grow up in the countryside or city?
Nowadays, with the accelerated increasing pace of technology and science, people life change dramatically. They used to live in villages in the late nineteenth century but now in the middle of the twenty-one century, it seems vital for most of my country people to live in gigantic super cities like Tehran, the capital of Iran.
I think it is indispensable to number a few advantages and disadvantages of both town and village life before, deciding which choice is more appealing. I believe that it is important to note my views are confined to my own country as far as I don’t have enough information and experience about other countries. City life used to have more benefits in the past since there were more amenity and facilities available there. Transportation, health services, educational complexes, and either entertainment mainly concentrated in the big cities, which plays a significant roll in migration from country sides and villages to cities. Now with the help of scientific developments, there is no different obvious to demonstrate. Both cities and country sides comprise all welfare amenities. For instance; there is about one hundred super modern department store in one of the small country sides in the north of Tehran, in contrast to its population. In my opinion, there are several governing factors to answer this question. Assume a country with a very good arranged city management, developed country sides, and high tech villages. In this equal condition, I think it is very better for children to live in the country side. My arguments for this point is listed as follows.
First and the most, clean weather, fresh water, and vast immense lands stay in the climax of my attitude of child nourishment, which helps to flourish young minds. Besides, these conditions make life deplete from stresses. On the other hand, it helps to grow mind imagination by watching what’s going on the environment. You can recall a famous event about “Sir Isaac Newton”, falling an apple helps him to discover gravity, the governing law of nature. He discovered this law by pondering in the calm atmosphere of a country side, not in chaos of London city.
Second, by living in the countryside you have plenty of time, teaching the children what ever there is not going to be trained in schools of city. You can teach them to listen to the symphony of nature, water dancing sound in the rivers and nightingales chanting on the trees.
In conclusion, I think it is better for young minds to nourish and play in the country sides despite the cities. They can then migrate to the cities whenever they are ready to fly with the strongest wings, which a countryside life create for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'significant role'?
Suggestion: significant role
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2305.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97840172786 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82656943126 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550755939525 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1989929125 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.217391304 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1304347826 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173520695511 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687947038733 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201971219542 0.0737576698707 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211822785823 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.353099509721 0.0645574589148 547% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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