Should a new restaurant be built in your neighborhood?
Human daily activity, life pressure and tension, and organized routine life create a kind of special concept, called entertainment. Leisure time or so called entertainment activities are various. It is possible for someone to enjoy reading book in a silent and clam library, whether the others enjoy walking in a park or, eating out.
Restaurants are classified into two major groups, fast foods and traditional restaurants. Fast food commonly serve pizzas, pastas, French-friezes, and sandwiches. In contrast to fast foods, in my country traditional restaurants serve various colorful healthy foods. For instance, Qormeh sabzi, this dish ingredients comprise rice, saffron, cooked vegetable, and beans.
There are two attitude toward my opinion. First and the most, I think it is quiet nessecery for our neighborhood to have a new traditional restaurant. Since the municipality is going to build a gigantic commercial center around the corner. As far as I am the designer engineer of that center, I know that there might be several fast foods in each corridor. Furthermore, there road union, which governs our road implementation activities plans to widen the street for infrastructure improvements, like enhancing the neighbor gas network. And Finally, our local traditional restaurant is closed for nearly two years because of sanitary issues. Besides, we need more traditional restaurants to maintain our relation with our cultural background, as far as our country is a historical travel destination previously called The Persia, it is truly important to keep an eye on our customs.
Secondly, it takes five years before the commercial center finalization. Till then, our neighbor needs Recreation places. There is only a cinema at the center of our neighborhood. These reasons terminate to a home cuisine center here with lacks hygiene basic. And finally having new facilities is fun. It is very astonishing to experience a new place where we can gather to eat delisious food and collaborate with each other, it evens provides the opportunity for us to listen to costum and classic music as a part of traditional restaurants.
In short, our neighbor really require a traditional restaurant.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, in contrast, in short, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38550724638 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10079364599 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3625445393 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4761904762 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097987126767 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286737350318 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377179529714 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425390648785 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366267999747 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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