should universities increase their tuition fees or they should be limited?
Since the beginning of the current century, universities' tuition fees have changed drastically. Some people believe that universities should not increase their fees because it could burden students' shoulders; however, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts on this belief. From a personal perspective, increasing tuition benefits outweigh its drawbacks given that it has a positive impact on university facilities and education.
The first and foremost point, provided that schools increase their costs, they could allocate more funds to hire high qualified professors. A vivid example that could be given to shed light on what was stated above prestigious universities, such as Harvard and Stanford are very expensive ones, thus they usually have very experienced teachers. Furthermore, professors are the most influential factor in the learning process; not only because they have a crucial impact on students' desire to learn, but they have a significant effect on their ethics and morals also. Consequently, hiring high qualified educators gave a positive impact on potential learning outcomes.
Next, coupled with proper education, more facilities are another reason to increase universities' fees. For instance, universities in California usually increase their fees, to that end they could allocate more funds to many facilities such as libraries, computers, and academic laboratories. To put it in another way, increasing tuition costs are imperative in order to continue progress and develop, so they could compete with other universities. Furthermore, universities could address these fees for making repairs, build sports areas, and upgrade classrooms. Therefore, increasing university costs have integral benefits.
One final point, although increasing tuition fees could put students under severe stress, they will receive a high-quality education and well- recognized diploma, which helps them to attain better jobs after graduation. For instance, most prestigious technological companies, such as Apple and Microsoft offer students from prestigious universities to do internships during the summer, so they will be able to get jobs at the same companies after graduation. As a result, increasing fees helps universities to keep a high level of education, which is very important to their students' future status.
Taking everything into consideration, without a doubt, universities have the right to increase their fees. It is suggested that the government increases scholarship wages according to the increase in tuition fees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79894179894 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02331880459 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4241471157 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.941176471 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38155407636 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12008828713 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520398142904 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212434233236 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642102165022 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 10.9000537634 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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