In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think it is good idea?
Having part time job for students have some merits and will help them in their future life. I totally agree with students working. This essay will support my idea with three reasons as fallow.
First of all, students who work find financial independency. The most significant advantage of this is that they learn to manage their income and how to save it. This will lead them to have more comfortable life in the future. In addition they will find themselves more confidence since they do not need to ask their parents for financial help.
Furthermore, they will improve some behavior skill such as speaking, threating, greeting, interaction with others in themselves. In contract with students who does work, jobless students are not sociable and face with different problems in having contract with others. For instance my eldest brother worked as a sale-man when he was studying in high school, but I have never worked when I was student. So he has better situation than me in contact with others and he know to how interact with different persons. While I have trouble in creating friendly and good relationship with others.
Finally, having job help them to bloom their talent and know their ability and interest. If they find a job which is relate to their major, will help them to become more success and get some empirical experience about their profession. According to the research results which published by American talent institution (ATI), most of successful persons like Bill Gates or Tom Jane worked when they were student, and those experiences helped them to prospected in their jobs.
In conclusion, in my point of view I believe having job is good for students. This idea was supported with three major advantages such as financial independency, behavior skill, and getting more experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...more comfortable life in the future. In addition they will find themselves more confiden...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...n than me in contact with others and he know to how interact with different persons....
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02990033223 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60142861195 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5173268239 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176250120638 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655213648802 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583868165287 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108789103569 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264565777996 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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