It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter time. Agree or disagree?
There are two different policies about the work’s hours per a day. The first one is about working for long hours for three days of week, however second one propose less hours for five days of week. In my point of view second policy is more reasonable. This assay will support this belief as fallows.
First of all, one of the most significant demerit of working for long hours is mental problem that majority of employee suffer from that. Work for a long period during a day is tiring which lead to less efficiency. According to the new research which is done by psychology analyze institution (P.A.I), there is a reverse relation between hours of work and job satisfaction. They demonstrate that less satisfaction is caused as a result of more hours during a day.
Furthermore, it can provide some problems for company’s manager. In contrast to work for more days with fewer hours, second policy make programming such as row material order, process time, and employee hire and scheduling more difficult for managers. For instance, if company decide to produce new product, it is going to establish new line or hire more workers, whereas it can allocate extra time for its worker instead of hire new worker.
Last but not least, financial problem is another downside of first policy. Since most of employee need to work extra hour to overcome their life expenditure, so they need to find second job. Spend time in two different jobs lead to less concentrate and despondent about one of them, which is not proper for company and employee.
In conclusion, it is discussed above that working for short time and five days a week is more preferable. Three major reasons, which includes psychological problem, management problem and financial problem was discussed to support this idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ays of week, however second one propose less hours for five days of week. In my point of v...
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ays of week, however second one propose less hours for five days of week. In my poin...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in contrast to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263157894737 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.12865497076 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.140350877193 0.0866891130778 162% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0263157894737 0.046263068375 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0292397660819 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143274853801 0.118717715034 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0350877192982 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64986947868 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292397660819 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0555555555556 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00877192982456 0.0209618222197 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116959064327 0.0139019557991 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1792.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 302.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93377483444 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327814569536 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254966887417 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172185430464 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105960264901 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64986947868 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 56.7527036208 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 18.875 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3556783334 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 0.644075263715 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 44.3716887417 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.39682539683 1.45489161554 165% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319257211142 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0816674071425 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0619712102541 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532906567334 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141140280721 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11612115208 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818632218993 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250164099275 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0737736512214 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198548789826 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348853089198 0.0618886996521 56% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
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Rates: 70.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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