university should give the same amount of money to their students sport activities as they give to their university libraries. do you agree or disagree?
There are two attitude about university policy for allocating same budget for sport activity and library. In my point of view, it is better to spend same amount of money to sport as they give to library. This essay will discuss about it and will suppose three reasons in following paragraphs.
First of all, everybody have some talents, which is blooming in different way. Allocating same budget to sport activity helps student to look for their talent and interesting in other activities. Success in future life can brought about as a result of finding and growing talent in proper time and way. For instance, Ali Dayi – the best football player of Asia and who won the best drop-goal of world- was studying in mechanical engineer in Sharif university- the highest rank of university in Iran- when he start to play football. Coach of Sharif football team invented his talent in football and introduced him to national team and led him to successful life.
Furthermore, it helps student to improve or modify their social skills and keep them healthy. They understand importance of corporate and coordinate better. Since some activity like football, volleyball and basketball is team-sport activity, so they learn victory will obtain just by team work and hard working. These experiences will help them in their life and career. Moreover, physical activities guaranteed students healthy which is so important for efficient study. There is a famous expression which is about relating between physical healthy and mind working –clever mind is in healthy body.
Finally, it goes university’s international rank up. International organization used to publish rate for ranking university, in other word they ordered university’s rank based on searching and studying; however these days they consider other factors such as dormitory, campus, sport instrument and facility, laboratory and etc. for ranking universities. According to the new research which published by student interesting institution (SII), sport facility has a key role for student in choosing university or college. Its impact increased from 20 percent to a quarter during the past decade that demonstrate its importance.
In conclusion, personally I believe university has to spend same amount of budget for sport activity and library. Three major reasons discussed above in support this idea.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283980582524 0.229887763892 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.157766990291 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970873786408 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0266990291262 0.046263068375 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0533980582524 0.0685040099705 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123786407767 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0461165048544 0.0351676179071 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83982427559 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315533980583 0.0309702414327 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0388349514563 0.0887237588012 44% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121359223301 0.0209618222197 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169902912621 0.0139019557991 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2368.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 373.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34852546917 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399463806971 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327077747989 0.251872472559 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.238605898123 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160857908847 0.112833075102 143% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83982427559 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587131367292 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 68.7674109275 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7619047619 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6632251856 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.761904762 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 50.4696795608 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.90816326531 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278539738984 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0791369966456 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069937843409 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470181410392 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141742692637 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092689654649 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883113603007 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250197208534 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0725363220345 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180139669226 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531161527277 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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