What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture?
There are a lot of qualities that vise children need to have. In my point of view sense of collaboration, respectful, and understanding are the most important. This essay will support my idea by providing some reasons in following paragraphs.
First of all, good children have to have suitable relationship with their parents and siblings. One of the most significant qualities of children is their sense of respectfulness. They have to act with their family and others respectfully. Because it cement family’s structure and help to establish better atmosphere in the house. Another important quality is the collaborating and have close bond with other members of family; however, nowadays because of developing of technologies children prefer to be alone, which leads to lose their sense of collaborating sense. According to the new research which was published by Manchester phycology institution (MPI), 85 percent of children who spend majority of their time with their digital gadget such as mobile, computer, game devise lonely, has less sense of corporate and face with trouble in communicating with others.
Furthermore, understanding family and specially parents is another important quality of good children. All family have a bad economic situation during their life which can be generated as a result of unemployment, disease, natural catastrophic, therefore, it is so important that children understand their family’s condition, but unfortunately because of media and prevailing luxury life children have some logical requirement. Two years ago, for instance, my friend’s family had financial problem and he forced his father to buy a new and expensive computer for him, since I bought a professional computer for myself. Thus, his father loaned money and bought it for him and his financial problem got intense.
In conclusion, good children must have some characteristic that unfortunately vanishing after a wile because of technology. Personally, I believe sense of collaboration, respect to family and understanding are important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57643312102 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27394885809 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4177172761 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.733333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12776536338 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559352731098 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606461988426 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783691245854 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186595555788 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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