Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risk. Which do you prefer! Use specific reasons and examples to support.
There is no shortage of about whether it is better for someone to do what they know very well or try new things and take risks. In my opinion, I would always prefer exploring things that are new to me over the keep on doing the things I know very well. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore further in the essay.
To begin with, society is always benifited by the people who tried new things and their risky adventures. In the process of learning new things, many people in the past have come up with new inventions that made our lives easier now. For instance, the well known inventor, chemist and the bussiness man Humphry Davy found the safety lamps for mine workers when he was studying the new chemicals that he had never used before.In contrast, if he learnt and studied only the chemicals that he knew previously, this great invention that helps millions of people working in the mines today might not be present. Thus, I believe that, it's worthwhile to try new things eventhough the results may not be fruitful.
Secondly, trying new things helps in bringing out our true potential. It's this hard situations that we experience in our risky endeavors makes us realize who we are. I have to say that my very own experience is a compelling example for this. A couple of years before, I've felt that I'm good for nothing and didn't posses any talents to succeed in this competitive world. However, when I went to college, I happend to take lead for a project presentation event which I've never done before and completely new to me. This experience made me realize that I've the potential to be a good leader and this realization happend only because of the risk I've taken to taken. Accordingly, taking risk and trying new things brings out your true potential
In conclusion, I firmly believe that taking risks in life is very important. It gives students like me an oppertunity to contribute for the betterment of society and find our true potential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63532763533 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48789245157 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566951566952 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6524706429 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.466666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253949532062 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838616826108 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726281538201 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146023377069 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088989856348 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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