There is not a single trait which make a child a good Son/Daughter but it is a cluster of qualities such as being responsible, staying punctual, and obeying parents etc. In my point of view, the quality which is marks a good Son/Daughter has more or less remained constant throughout times. I believe this for two reasons.
First, Obeying Parents is consider as a sign of a good Son/Daughter. in fact, it is consider a excellent trait for youngsters as children are obedient at young age they are less likely to misbehave with their parents which in long run helps them as they can get comfortable with their parents and open the channel of communication.For instance, if a child is rebellious from the beginning it is difficult to put cogent argument and convince him to forgo his arrogance and just listen for once which in turn leads to have a caustic relationship with his parents and elders. Therefore obedience is a minor but very important quality for a Son/Daughter should have in order to have a successful relationship with his parents and this trait will remain and is unlikely to change in near future.
Secondly, "being responsible" is one of the founding stones of good qualities, if a child shows responsible behaviour from a very early stage it lucidly shows that how much good potential the child has and is often consider a good quality. For instance, responsible children never abandon their parents and anyone who needs them they instead help which is an excellent quality for a Son/Daughter to have so they can have.
These traits are two of many good qualities which a good Son/Daughter should have and these traits have not change since ages as they are very immanent in nature
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in fact, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85034013605 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91216854313 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506802721088 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.569431691 48.9658058833 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.444444444 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206538931599 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114744940522 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793615919793 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161773319039 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568237402042 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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