A person should never make an important decision alone.
People often suggest that an important decision should be taken with utmost care. While, some suggest that doing so will consume a lot of time and, in the end, is it worth taking all the time for a single decision?. In my opinion, it is worth it. All the important decisions in which a person takes care to be carefully considered and, even should be run by other sets of eyes before acting on them. I believe this for two reasons.
Firstly, when making a decision it is always advisable to have a wider perspective and, a wider scope. When we run our decision and thought process with another set of eyes, they might catch the point which we might have missed. For instance, when I was in my last year a friend of mine made a product that was very creative and could solve the fraud transaction problem for banks. He without contacting anyone sold his product for pennies where, if he would have had contacted people who or had discussed it with someone he would have made millions of dollars.
Secondly, It is always advisable to have an open dialogue when it comes to decision-making, as it does not hurt and complete blame cant is put on a single person. For instance, major multinational companies follow this approach. Multinational companies before taking any decision run their decision by multiple stakeholders and, it is a unanimous process if they have the majority of the voting then only the decision is executed. Hence, later the blame cant is pinpoint on a single person.
Thirdly, It is important to consider other people who will be impacted by this decision For instance, a married man should not take a decision of leaving his job without discussing this with his family, as his family will be directly affected by his decision and it might cause some adverse effect on his relationship with his family.
To close, every man has to make some of the other decisions during his life and, it is always advisable to have people involved in the process of decision-making for his own good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ion is executed. Hence, later the blame cant is pinpoint on a single person. Th...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y. To close, every man has to make some of the other decisions during his life and, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71751412429 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61814883267 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.566894574 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22886770025 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804769402345 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766187248604 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136051199323 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534992176881 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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