The lecture states that Endotherms are the mammals which maintain their internal body temperature warm no matter what and provide the example that dinosaurs are endotherms and provide three proofs for the claim. However, the professor disagrees with the reading and provides three supporting counter reasons.
Firstly, the reading claims that the polar dinosaurs were endotherms and claims that only mammals who are endotherms can survive such a cold and harsh climate. However, the professor refutes this point by saying that the polar region were not that cold during these time when dinosaurs were around and another possible explanation provied by the professor was that dinosaurs could have migrated during the winter so avoid such harsh climate and the existance of polar dinosaurs does not necessarily mean that dinosaurs were endotherms.
Secondly, the reading claims that dinosaur’s leg position has a corelation with it being endothermic as physiology of endothermy allows sustained physical activity. While, the professor opposes this point of view by stating that the position of the leg in dinosaurs has anything but corelation with them being endothermic. The Professor explains that the position of legs were does not proof and it only states
Thirdly, bone structure have a relation with endothermy that bone struture of dinosaurs have Haversian canals that is they have blood vessels that allow them to grow quickly. However the professor argues against this point and states that the pressence of this bone structure is not proof enough and states that the bones in dinosaurs had rings which occures after aging which helps to prove that dinosaurs were not endothermic.
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...endotherms and claims that only mammals who are endotherms can survive such a cold and ...
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...only states Thirdly, bone structure have a relation with endothermy that bon...
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Suggestion: However,
...essels that allow them to grow quickly. However the professor argues against this point...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 12.0772626932 182% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40601503759 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58304328503 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0238198001 49.2860985944 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.75 110.228320801 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 21.698381199 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183101560936 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944762273474 0.0996497079465 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117309699593 0.0662205650399 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122091684767 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977352963829 0.0443174109184 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.3589403974 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.2367328918 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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