Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists.
In today's technologically modern era there are a lot of emerging fields two of them are scientists and artists. There is always disagreement among people who field are important and valued. In my opinion, scientists and researchers are more important to the scientific community and to the general audience as they help us shape our life better.
Firstly, Scientists and researchers are helping us in living better. If it weren’t for them we wouldn’t have seen any scientific breakthroughs and still would be living a nomadic life. Secondly, it's not scientists persay are valued by society, it's their field of study, for instance, a Doctor is more valued than an archaeologist as it's common notion doctors save lives. Thirdly, If it weren’t for doctors we would have never found a cure for deadly diseases so scientists and researchers play an important role in our life.
When it comes to musicians and artist they do tend to acquire a lot of fame in a short span of time and live a luxurious life when compared to scientists as their work gets admired by millions and billions of people. Numerous people get inspiration from artists in our society. For instance, the rapper Eminem (Marshal Mathers) is a world-renowned artist and is one of the best rappers of our generation.
In the end, it boils down to the fact how a field is contributing positively to society and it goes saying that researchers and scientists have an upper hand here.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97975708502 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9814508476 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562753036437 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5594451865 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.818181818 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186397491095 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626284345543 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627451905059 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983108950109 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456861780825 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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