People have always been making opportunities for handling their life in a smart way and they use many devices and technologies to make their life easier. As a matter of fact, I support the idea that parents should let their children use a smart phone and I will explicate my perspective in following paragraphs.
First and foremost, These days children should learn how to use new technologies like internet, computers, and cell phones. The smart phone is the best devices to ease their communication and web browsing. So by restrict them and do not allow them to use a smart phone we as parents do not let them grow.
In addition, the other reason that coming to my mind is when children using their cell phone they can learn and gain more experiences by web surfing and connecting to the internet. In today's world cell phones give them the ability to study or research in some subject that they like. So they can use this device not only as a communication but also as a tool to study and research the articles. For instance, my niece study only in her smart phone and also she learned how to play music by herself.
Moreover, when parents and other adults using their cell phone everywhere, it is not fair to forbid the younger adult and children. Children learn from their parents and their acquaintance how to behave and how to do something so, parents should let their children have the cell phone. another noteworthy aspect that should be addressed in this ongoing explanation is smart phone can encourage them to learn how to program. Furthermore, they can play a game that challenges them to think more and solve problems. To sum up, I agree to let young children have a smart phone and I believe they can learn many things and improve their IQ by using this high tech device.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a smart way" with adverb for "smart"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g opportunities for handling their life in a smart way and they use many devices and technolog...
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Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...let their children have the cell phone. another noteworthy aspect that should be addres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62578616352 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51777628494 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474842767296 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0703755513 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263603410695 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106742845283 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413489395054 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173167607931 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446051567357 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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