SOME PEOPLE ARE ORGANIZED OTHERS ARE NOT ORGANIZED. WHICH TYPE OF PERSON ARE YOU ?
This topic asked whether or not i am organized an individual. Certainly, some people if asked would state that i am well organized while others would mention that the question depends on a great deal of factors, for example, someone may hold the view that an organized individual? According to who, what basis. As far as i am concerned, i adopt a firm position that i am very well organized a person.
First reason coming to mind substantiating my stand point is concerned with this issue that my life style which is contingent on being organized. Distinctly, i do plan in order for expected as well as unexpected condition which i may encounter is the vital indicator of how well i am at organizing. The best example that fit this notion is my last praise that i received from my mother. When i was on holiday, i asked my mom to stop by my apartment several times to feed my cat. Later on, i received appraise worthy comments from her associated with my apartment due to she was amazed from first moment she stepped in, she realized my apartment was so clean, all furniture well arranged and books, clothes so on and so forth. It goes without saying that, someone's sentimental, specialy your mom's opinion is well enough to clarify your characteristics.
Another vital reason which deserve some word here is my discipline. it is undeniable fact that the discipline qualities are most seen on the individuals who are more inclined toward being well organized. Since i am regarded so disciplinary by individuals who knows me, i own this quality to know how to organize. For the purpose of the illustration, let me summarize a scientific survey which was conducted by Department of Social Science of Colombia, that demonstrated that most prominent and successful individuals are well organized and as well as being neat, tidy and what is more disciplinary. Without a shadow of doubt, these fundamentals are indication based on researched.
Having considered all the aforementioned grounds discussed above, i am of the opinion that characteristic of disciplinary and plans are the viral valuable basis i have which made a greater organized person. Therefore, there is no doubt that i do not regard myself as untidy or unorganized person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, no doubt, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90789473684 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99503166618 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560526315789 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6720807263 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.705882353 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169517906728 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516115157935 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536017612661 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112212790559 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554121333242 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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